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I like the idea, but I’m hearing this as mainly a disparate collection of loops. I’d recommend you do some experimenting with the samples and beats, either with timing or in an editor, in order to get them to line up more and transition from one to the other more smoothly.

Really well-constructed piece overall! My only two nitpicks are that the electronic noises should probably be mixed down a little so as not to overpower the rest, and the string writing feels iffy to me at some points, though it’s hard to tell how iffy. Can you post or DM me a version with just the orchestral instruments so I can hear it better and give you clearer feedback?

The troll scream made me almost laugh out loud in public. Well done! You’ve got a great and expressive range of character voices!

SquigglyVA responds:

Thanks so much! Always a good time when I get to go goblin mode!

It took me a couple listens to recognize the changes in vibe between different sections (though with the type of stuff I compose, I could be just blind). But it's actually a really well-developed song! I love the little touches like the skating sound effects in the background!

Sounds amazing! How do you create ambient stuff? That's one of those things I struggle with.

Mantis responds:

Thank you so much, this was made in vcv rack with some ambient modules. Vcv rack is a really cool playground for this sort of stuff!

Delivery is a bit samey from word to word/phrase to phrase sometimes, but otherwise, this works really well! I’d love to work with you in a collab project I’m doing, let me know if you’re interested!

Pretty good! I love the addition of the grunts, coughs, and wheezes - these were all executed very well! The lower voice needs some work, but otherwise, really great demo! If you’re still active, I’d love to have you as part of a collab project I’m working on.

rebekahamberclark responds:

Thank you! :) I've sent you a PM.

Only critique I have is that the audio peaks a few times. Otherwise, excellent delivery and vivid characterization!

If you’re still active at all, I’d love to work with you! I’ve been trying to find VAs for a project, and you fit the bill for one of the characters!

I’m not sure what you have going in the background, but there’s a bit of a buzz in the audio. I’d also recommend that you come up with lines beforehand to better demonstrate the voices. Otherwise, pretty good demo!

Absolutely love the cinematic touches like the voices in the beginning. This hits hard overall - it's got even more power than regular rock elements alone.

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