Thetageist's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[undone watercolor test]

This one's actually pretty good! A couple things I notice in terms of critiques are that it took me a bit to see the tears, and a few of the 100s could be written more cleanly. But those are just tiny nitpicks.

LapisTheWolf responds:

thank you! ^^

[Motivation and dreams]

Sleep would probably be advised. I often find myself more easily discouraged when I'm tired. Either way, not everything that any one person makes will succeed, and that's okay.

Great and relatable comic as usual.

[Love Me Like We Never Die]

This one's really nice! The only issues I see are those of perspective with 3D objects (shelves, bed, etc). It's also really sweet, though!

LapisTheWolf responds:

ty :D

[Marauder]

Once again, awesome pixel art, and once again, nice color choice for the lighting. The orange and the Marauder's green eyes give this a Halloweeny effect.

[Burger and Fries]

As a vegetarian I appreciate the plant-based burger and would love to go eat at McCy's! Also, you definitely have a good grasp of how to draw and shade the burger - I bet that if you tried doing it in that painterly style again it would turn out really well!

[DTIYS Dwarfs]

This'd make for a great D&D concept. I'm struggling to find the original, but I do love what you did here!

ZeTrystan responds:

If you click on the #dtiysyonsoncb in the description, you'll get to all the drawings (including his original! :D)

[Lady Astra]

It always amazes me that you're able to make such complicated animations for each of these characters. (I still want a game featuring them and starring Magpie lmao)

pInkmoth responds:

3d animation is very good for the types of animations i'm doing

[just kiss me silly!]

I love that! Really adorable and I can tell you're expressing the feeling in a way that is completely unique to you. Nice one!

[Brain Angel]

Amazing job with the pixel art as always! I like your choice of lighting color - the purple really contrasts with the gold in the being's design, and kinda gives it a regal feel, which would make sense for a leader/boss character. Nice work!

[SjälTale Concept 1]

That's cool that you're gonna try to make this into a comic. All the stuff that I'd critique about this seems to come from the fact that it's just a concept sketch and not the finished product.

LapisTheWolf responds:

ty!