Thetageist's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Love has no wall]

Hah, I love that you're giving him ketchup! The background works well (maybe make things a little more defined but otherwise nice), and your line art keeps getting better! The only tweak I'd suggest to line art in the future is working on proportions a little and making sure that the characters look like they're standing up straight (I know I've already gone into detail on both of those). You definitely have been improving in all of the aspects I'm critiquing you on, though!

Comment about the speech bubble: Currently, my favorite kind of speech bubble that you've used is the one from "Tear and Lapis", since it seems to go well stylistically with the picture. Maybe you could do something with having a transparent background on the bubble and the text and bubble colors change based on what stands out with the picture's background?

LapisTheWolf responds:

thank you!

[Dr. Sharpe, Surgeon-General]

Really love this character design. How long did it take you to model his microscope eye with the different zoom lenses?

pInkmoth responds:

Didn't time it but a few minutes? It's not a very complicated part and i had a pretty clear idea of what i was gonna make

[Omori Bunnies]

I love this. I love all of this. This is really adorable. The game sounds interesting too!

ZeTrystan responds:

I do recommend it!

[Pizza]

Wow, really nice job! I can tell you put a lot of effort into making it work in the painterly style. I know you've been working a long time on developing that art style :)

[Perfection]

Dang, that's beautiful! I love it! Reminds me of a few video games I've seen, actually, that I think you might really like.

DanielGalaxy712 responds:

Hmmm ... its interesting , what the games ?
Thanks for respond :)

[Master Kohga]

That's awesome. You really achieved a nice atmosphere with the lighting, background, and color scheme.

[Valentines Sorrow]

You are completely valid to use drawing like this as a coping mechanism, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise!

As for the art itself, it looks pretty good and I love the atmosphere!

LapisTheWolf responds:

thank you so much!!

[heyo]

The spiritual equivalent of being bought a coffee, as portrayed in a way that only you could do. Nice work!

clarigaricus responds:

Thanks a lot!

[Asriel Lineless art!]

I love how you drew Asriel! I feel like if you tweaked the perspective of the background, he'd stand out more from the background. I love the background itself, though, as well as the way you drew the save point star! Really nice color scheme too!

LapisTheWolf responds:

thank you!!

[Star Wars - The Empire Strikes Back]

This is amazing! I love the comic book style - you are SO good at cel shading - and the color scheme makes this all the more dynamic! So good! :D