Thetageist's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bonnie and Hida (2019 doodle)]

This is an awesome concept! If you need help brainstorming more story for them, hit me up!

I can see a clear vision here of what you want your art style to be, and your line work is almost perfectly smooth, which is no small feat from my experience! If I may, I think the necks are a little bit long, and I’d also recommend practicing face shapes, hands, and legs. But that’s really all the small nitpicks I see in this one! Really cool overall!

Commonbird responds:

While this is an old doodle I will take these critiques into consideration :>

[Artfight - Trent]

What a happy boi! I can’t look at that smile without smiling too.

I love how you do the lenses on glasses, as well as the lighting in general. And the colors!

Bleak-Creep responds:

Thanks! He’s havin’ himself a good time. :)

[red...]

Cool scene-drawing here! Some details could be practiced for the future but I won’t overload you with critiques. I’m happy you enjoy it, and I think it looks cool too! The Wolf especially :)

Chipsoapart responds:

Aw, thanks!
I was actually thinking about redrawing this sometime in the future to see if I have improve or not. :3

[Jelly Jelly]

This design is so colorful and creative, but yet so unified! It looks great!

I can’t think of many jellyfish-related names - maybe Medusa, since it’s related to the name of one of the taxonomic classifications of jellyfish? It could sound too evil, on the other hand. Hmm. Scientific names of different species would probably be a good place to start looking for inspiration.

Bleak-Creep responds:

Ooh, that’s a good idea. Medusa might actually be a good fit, because a lot of the other characters are supposed to be afraid of her, purely because she’s a jellyfish.

[Meryl again]

This is awesome! You’re improving pretty steadily!

Chipsoapart responds:

AW, Thank you! ❤

[Artfight - Vivi]

So cute! I love what you did with her hair in that lineless style!

Bleak-Creep responds:

Thanks! Making an effort to maintain the same lineless style for all my artfight attacks this year since I did the exact same thing last year. Always a fun little challenge on the characters without too many colors in their designs.

[Lapis Lazuli (Minecraft)]

Good to see you back! This design is cool, I like it.

IDeactive responds:

i never disappeared i just forgot to post stuff on NG because ive been drawing sketches more lately

[Ultra-stitious]

Those poor cats, though.

The design looks a little visually disjoint, I’m not sure whether that’s for any real reason or just me having trouble adjusting my eyes to it, but it’s a lot of fun! I’d love to see more elements of unlucky things added to it as a little scavenger hunt or something!

jouste responds:

yeah there wasn't too many things that i could add to her that where considered unlucky so the design is a little janky for sure.

*highfives

[Core Keeper gang]

This is really cool! I’ve never heard of Core Keeper! What is it?

ErasedMe responds:

Thank you! It's a game that's like Terraria and Stardew Valley and Minecraft. You are underground and have to mine, farm, fight bosses and explore. It's on steam and I can only recommend if you like the mentioned games

[Future]

I feel a sense of movement from this. At first it looked like a big cross blocking most of the view, but then I realized that that’s empty space between those pillars (?) and it’s like the viewer is about to enter that space, the uncertain future. Good to see you back again!

DanielGalaxy712 responds:

Future constantly get closer )
I glad to see you too :)