Thetageist's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Asriel Lineless art!]

I love how you drew Asriel! I feel like if you tweaked the perspective of the background, he'd stand out more from the background. I love the background itself, though, as well as the way you drew the save point star! Really nice color scheme too!

LapisTheWolf responds:

thank you!!

[undone watercolor test]

This one's actually pretty good! A couple things I notice in terms of critiques are that it took me a bit to see the tears, and a few of the 100s could be written more cleanly. But those are just tiny nitpicks.

LapisTheWolf responds:

thank you! ^^

[Love Me Like We Never Die]

This one's really nice! The only issues I see are those of perspective with 3D objects (shelves, bed, etc). It's also really sweet, though!

LapisTheWolf responds:

ty :D

[DTIYS Dwarfs]

This'd make for a great D&D concept. I'm struggling to find the original, but I do love what you did here!

ZeTrystan responds:

If you click on the #dtiysyonsoncb in the description, you'll get to all the drawings (including his original! :D)

[Lady Astra]

It always amazes me that you're able to make such complicated animations for each of these characters. (I still want a game featuring them and starring Magpie lmao)

pInkmoth responds:

3d animation is very good for the types of animations i'm doing

[SjälTale Concept 1]

That's cool that you're gonna try to make this into a comic. All the stuff that I'd critique about this seems to come from the fact that it's just a concept sketch and not the finished product.

LapisTheWolf responds:

ty!

[Blues]

You drew the dude pretty well, I'm just a bit confused about the scenery. Is that meant to be a Minecraft hill? Also, I'm wondering if the picture might pop out a bit more or have better composition if there was more sky and the hill didn't dominate the background?

LapisTheWolf responds:

sorta i got a bored with the backround and kinda just made a weird hill.XD also ty ^^

[Lupina]

Aww, she's cute! I love the design (props to her creator) and I love what you did with the background! Really cool! (It kinda looks like the Nirvana smiley face - was that intentional on your part/on her creator's part?)

Nokkorone responds:

glad you like it! i based the bg on the hat design and just took my own take.

[magpie answers a few more questions]

It amazes me that you're able to make these kinds of rounded shapes and cool lining effects in Blender. Also, I absolutely love these characters and their designs! She'd be a good fit for the protagonist of the hypothetical quirky indie game I mentioned in my other comment :P

pInkmoth responds:

Thank you! I know a lot of swell tricks

[I'm dogshit at drawing on pc (Ideac)]

I feel you there. I don't even draw on my computer at all. For most of my artwork, I trace sketchbook drawings using a program on my phone, actually! And I thought I was the weird one for digitizing my sketchbook drawings, but it's cool to hear that someone else does it too! You are free to use whatever format and method allows you to draw best! :)

Cute drawing of your persona, by the way! I keep thinking that I haven't drawn mine in a while...

IDeactive responds:

a lot of people do that actually, its pretty common