NO! NO! NO! WILL WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU THINKING LMAO
Awful concept (I say this jokingly X'D) but pretty decent execution. I feel like the shine/reflecting light stuff was a little too sloppy and airbrush-y, but the rest of it's actually pretty good.
Edit: Understandable about the shine, but THE ORIGINAL SKETCH WAS WHAAAAAAAAAT?!