Thetageist's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Grim Reaper in the Moonlight (feedback wanted)]

Line work looks decent underneath, but I think the glow and shadow effects are a little bit airbrushy and too opaque, making the picture look blurry.

For the stars, you might also need practice drawing small dots, or to get a sparkle or dots brush - currently they look a bit diagonal, like snow blowing sideways.

You are really off to a good start, though!

[Sick as hell robot warrior guy I want to collab with someone to make a game for]

Looks like it could be good classic Flash art style with a little more practice! Lines are sketchy but not so sketchy that they lose that nostalgic charm. All I’d say is I’d recommend thinking in 3D when drawing shapes like this - you’ve got good shading, but the overall shapes look a little flat, and not how I reckon they’d be if this robot existed in 3D. Maybe some perspective practice for different shapes such as cubes, rectangular prisms, etc?

Keep drawing, you’ll be eligible to be scouted if you have at least 4 artworks!

[Mommy mearest in a Jessica rabbit inspired dress]

The hair and the form-fitting part of the dress look great! The part where it hits the floor could use some more practice, but otherwise, it’s really good!

Chipsoapart responds:

Thank you!!

(Tbh, I feel like this art could have been better if I didn't add that weird floor thing lol.)

[International cat day]

Heh, I think I recognize that brush on the dress!

Really cute, I love the poses.

[sketch commission dump]

Great sense of personality with each one of these! Love the smoke details with the rogue too - I kinda want to study it as a reference, since I'm not the best at that type of elemental stuff!

pluckyshroom responds:

what a sweet thing to say! i encourage you to also use real life as your first teacher cos my fool ass has definitely made mistakes and shortcuts over the years lol

[Rise of the dead]

Good to see you again! Absolutely love this spooky lighting!

[ranathan put those away]

The Jessica Rabbit one just killed me, haha! Absolutely slaying! Love the different poses and whatnot for each one!

Edit: HA THAT’S FRICKIN’ GREAT X’D

pluckyshroom responds:

that one was specifically requested by nyx (the commissioner) so you have them to thank lol

[[After Life] Eris]

The face and lighting are definitely more expressive, though the pose she’s doing seems to be hidden a bit by her outfit.

Love that background, too - kinda looks like she’s sneaking through lasers, lol.

KediKatzen responds:

Thank you so much for the feedback ^^

[Bommina]

Tell the creator I say the design looks so cool! The pose also has some cool energy that I’m struggling to describe.