Thetageist's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Heart Drawing]

First review was written when I was tired and sick of being pulled into a fight between two parties I didn’t want to choose between to begin with.

Not bad line art! It’s got some sketchy bits that just need a clean up.

But once again, I just wish you would stop obsessing over what other artists say to other people. It’s not healthy for you, and it’s giving you a reputation for being an insecure drama queen, which just makes people hate you more. I want to see you prosper here, but you can’t do that if you don’t chill out.

sincronikon responds:

Thanks for taking this seriously Theta. I've been through it all. I know I'm a weirdo, but you're safe to dump circumstances on me, OK?

Hey, what sketchy bits would you clean up? I was kinda OK with the wonky lines around the edges, but think I failed at proportions. Is this accurate?

I'll determine what's healthy or not for myself, as we all must do. Take care of yourself.

[Axel & Yuna Cover Art - 2]

I’m surrounded by self-shipping.

Love the colors!

MeltyCat responds:

Self-shipping?

[Axel & Yuna Cover Art - 1]

There was going to be a comic with yet another Rae in yet another ship? Dear god, how big is this extended universe?

Very pretty art!

MeltyCat responds:

Hurrhurr. There IS a long running comic. But no. Her name is Axel.

[CarnEvil! (My Version)]

This is a cool alternate design! I looked at your recent OC as well and I can tell you’ve really got some good design sense, especially for horror! I think you would be good friends with @nurm123 - you’ve got similar tastes!

Main thing I can think of to improve on is smoother line work and paying attention to any kinks in the curves. It might also be time to start working on adding detail to your backgrounds. Hopefully that should help with your art in the future!

TheMadCap96 responds:

I appreciate the response and I'll keep that artist in mind ☺️

And I'll be sure to work on improving my art

[Send In The Clown Doodles]

Oh look, it’s Umlaut! Hallo!

You’ve done a pretty decent job with this artwork. If I were to suggest anything, I’d recommend working on clean line work, smooth curves, and proportions. It seems you’ve been improving on that a bit with the more recent stuff!

Hailenvy responds:

Thank you so much for your suggestion. ^w^

[CarnEvil Doodle]

Oh no, Umlaut’s become a cute girl! Whatever shall we do?

I’d give critiques, but I get that this is old and your art has really improved since making this. I’d love to see a redraw with a full design!

[Hamebone (CarnEvil-1998)]

Eyy, it’s Hambone! Look at that!

Pretty clean drawing, I’m impressed with the line work and coloring!

[Stardust Crusaders OCs]

We love to see some Jojo OCs! The designs are really cool! I want to hear more!

katkatkat420 responds:

Thank you! I wanted to tag you in my news post but I couldn't :(

Heres my oc lore sheet: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xM3HgzofYwLLJUgkzKJj2RqvcsEOTFfSQiDJhX7AnDU/edit?usp=sharing

Selene and Layla are at the very bottom! Layla's section isn't finished atm though

[Naira Battle Arena]

I love your lighting and colored line art! It makes everything look so glowy and vibrant!

Astrachvoid responds:

Omg thx you <3 <3 <3

[insanity lobo]

That’s frickin’ hilarious, I love it.

Looking at this in comparison to your other works, the painting actually turned out pretty well for this one! I’d just recommend trying to clean it up more in future artworks!

Edit: Understood, you’ve got a respectable intention behind it! I can be an awful perfectionist with my art too, so I know where you’re coming from. :)

TheBeastInTheTable responds:

Thank ya. Though, I'm actually tryna be *less* clean with this account. I'm still a novice and I've got a tendency to punch above my weight and put a bunch of wasted hours into a single piece instead of just having my fun and moving on.

All three pics I've posted here so far (decided on having a separate identity for art if I'm gonna try to take art seriously) I've been tryna just "ight, it conveys what I want it to, let's pack it up so that I can move on" and while I'm still bad at actually frequently drawing, I'm hoping to not abandon files in purgatory because I expected too much of myself outta them.

I'll get better at the details with time. That time needn't be 12 hours on a single canvas (done that twice before)