Last one I dig into, I swear. Your fabric rendering on the characters looks pretty good, I would just prefer if you put the same amount of effort into the tablecloth and the background overall. If you think it’ll be too visually busy, then you can just do the detailed render and then blur it a bit to keep the focus on the characters.
I think it’s also a good time to experiment with your art style in general and ask yourself if it’s everything you want it to be, or whether you want to emphasize some aspects to make it more distinctive.
You’ve got potential! Keep sticking around with the other horror artists here, I think I can speak for all of us when I say we appreciate another one :)