Thetageist's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Animation I made today]

This actually looks pretty nice! I've only got one thing to critique, really - the end of Lapis's arm should be closer to Sans's back (like how you did with his arm on Lapis's back), as it currently looks like she has a sleeve but no hand. Otherwise, nice work!

LapisTheWolf responds:

tysm!

[Man with the answers]

That is terrifying as heck and I love it.

nashotobi responds:

thank you! have you read the rest of the book? you can find it here on my profile page

[Oh My]

Should I be scared...? His words concern me.

Jokes aside, nice work on this one! His hand in the pocket doesn't look quite right, but that's a minor nitpick. Maybe another thing you could work on is making the backgrounds look a bit more realistic (putting shading on the trees, etc)? Otherwise, great job!

LapisTheWolf responds:

thank you

[Guardian angel]

Wow! Congrats on getting a bunch of features since I last looked at your stuff, and also congrats on getting your Kickstarter funded! You're still continuing to nail the sketchy/painterly art style with the minimalist color scheme. Really nice work.

nashotobi responds:

thank you! yeah I've already almost released the whole book for free 93/100 stories

[da comfort times]

Are these all your OCs for Hazbin Hotel? (I think? I know very little about the series.) If so, they all go really well with the design style of the series as far as I've seen! If not, well, cool designs anyway. This artwork is really wholesome and I like it - it definitely conveys the feeling of having a friend group and the love and good times that come along with it.

Edit: Oh, sorry about that. I had no intention to offend you.

Angiedollhouse responds:

no, they're not, please do not compare my oc's to hazbin hotel, they're all made from a feeling of mine, they're very personal to me mwahahah
thank you anyways <3

[TASTY]

I like the conflict between the gory subject matter and pastel colors.

anewworldfool responds:

theyre hugos favorite colors, :]

[Lapis in Danganronpa]

Wow, you did a really good job with this one, especially from the standpoint of the things I normally critique you about! Nice job with the Danganronpa art style as well! I also like Lapis's outfit here, the hooded dress is cool.

LapisTheWolf responds:

Thank you!! (* ^ ω ^)

[GOES FERAL]

This is really cool! I love the bright colors and color scheme, the various effects, and the general magical/trippy look of it.

Angiedollhouse responds:

awaaa thank you!!! :D mwhaha thatz the kinda vibe i was going for :)

[I promise it'll be ok!]

You're definitely getting a lot better with these! Nice work! Skeletons still don't have noses, though... That apple also does seem to be a bit big for where it is in the background. But otherwise, really nice work!

LapisTheWolf responds:

ty ^^

[sketchhh]

The light in the corner makes the stuff in the corner a little bit harder to see, but that honestly doesn't interfere with all that much. There's also some stuff that gets cut off in the top, but that also isn't much.For a sketch, this is honestly pretty good! Nice work!

LapisTheWolf responds:

tysm^^