Thetageist's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[friskkk]

Looks like you got the perspective right in the background! Nice work! I also really love the dreamy scenery and the color scheme!

LapisTheWolf responds:

:D Thank you !!!

[Tear and Lapis]

Not bad for another early animation! I have a few suggestions. Overall, this is aesthetically pleasing, but from an animation standpoint, it looks a little bit jerky. The blinks seem a little bit abrupt, the text from Sans isn't on screen for long enough in each cycle, and I'm wondering why your logo isn't in every frame. But otherwise, nice job! I like the glowing effects from the blue heart and the pink locket, those actually make the scene look more magical and kind of bring out the emotion in it.

LapisTheWolf responds:

Thank you and I drew my signature on one of the frames instead of being on the backround (which in fire alpaca you can set the layer to always display the first frame with the signature on it.But, if I go over a certain amount of frames it lags quite a bit. Which is why I tend to just leave the signature on one frame and not go through moving it to a frame which is always visible.)

[Tranquil Sunshine]

I'll give you a break with the advice about backgrounds looking too tilted-upwards, since I've already said that a lot. (If you ever need me to clarify what I'm saying, please do say so.) The water also looks a bit strange to me, I'm not sure what exactly it is or how you would fix it. But I absolutely love the light and reflection effects in this one! You also did a nice job with the grass in the bottom of the picture and the little flowers in the top left corner.

LapisTheWolf responds:

tysm! I'm slowly fixing the weird upward backround XD.

[Terraria : Hallow Biome : Environmental Fanart]

This is really beautiful. I love the colors, you truly have captured the deceptive beauty of the Hallow! I love the little animations that make the scene come alive, too, and the inclusion of that Wyvern-shaped cloud from the game! Nice work!

RunicPixels responds:

<3 Thanks!

[Persona 5: Nintendo Game Boy edition]

All of these animations are so smooth and they really draw in the eye! I know close to nothing about Persona 5, but I can get a feel for what these characters are like based on how they look in these animations. Well done and congrats on the feature!

Ioruko responds:

Thanks so much! Glad to hear that!

[GLOWEEY]

I like the color scheme you used here! My advice about backgrounds looking a little too tilted upwards also applies here, but otherwise, it's pretty decent!

LapisTheWolf responds:

Thank you :P

[Marriage?!?!?]

The sketchy lines are a bit odd in places, but I absolutely love the colors you used (I know, I say that a lot). The background is a little hard to discern, but that actually contributes to the dreamlike feel of the piece. Forgot to mention in my message, but I'm currently working on figuring out a good pose for your art trade, and will start drawing the lines soon!

LapisTheWolf responds:

tysm :"D

[The Past...]

The line art once again looks decent to me, and I like the technique you used to draw the flowers. My advice about the background in "WOA" also applies to the one on the left, but not as much. Otherwise, nice work! I'm interested to take a look at the story once I have time!

LapisTheWolf responds:

<3 tysm :")

[WOA]

The line art looks pretty good, aside from a little bit of sketchiness - sometimes the sketchy lines get in the way of the aesthetic appeal of the drawing, and sometimes they don't. The background also looks a bit odd from a perspective standpoint, like it's too tilted upwards, but I'm not entirely sure how I'd recommend you solve that. I'd also like it if the particle effects around the hearts stood out from the background a little bit more. Other than that, nice work!

LapisTheWolf responds:

tysm!

[Papyrusssss]

This drawing is cute and I like the atmosphere! A few tips: I feel like the tilted perspective of the drawing is a little bit strange. The scarf looks a bit stiff, like it's standing up on its own - look at reference images for how scarves generally look. Also, I like that you're using text and speech bubble lines that will stand out from the background, but I'm still not entirely sure about this one. It might be beneficial to experiment a bit with different styles of speech bubbles to see which works best. Otherwise, nice work! The light effects in the background are cool!

LapisTheWolf responds:

TY :)