Really quick question, is this your DeviantArt account? If so, you can indicate as such by adding a link to it on your profile so that people will know it’s yours. If not, regardless of whether the original artist gave consent, Newgrounds really doesn’t like it if you post other people’s art, so please try to stay away from that!
Here’s a review for whoever drew this: The line art is very clean and the shading on the dress, boots, and skin is done well. I recommend you use reference images to figure out how to draw and shade fur (I know, it took me a long time to figure out too) and shade hair. Don’t let this discourage you. You’ve already got a lot of stuff right. If you keep practicing, you’ll figure out the other stuff too!