Thetageist's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tear and Lapis]

Not bad for another early animation! I have a few suggestions. Overall, this is aesthetically pleasing, but from an animation standpoint, it looks a little bit jerky. The blinks seem a little bit abrupt, the text from Sans isn't on screen for long enough in each cycle, and I'm wondering why your logo isn't in every frame. But otherwise, nice job! I like the glowing effects from the blue heart and the pink locket, those actually make the scene look more magical and kind of bring out the emotion in it.

LapisTheWolf responds:

Thank you and I drew my signature on one of the frames instead of being on the backround (which in fire alpaca you can set the layer to always display the first frame with the signature on it.But, if I go over a certain amount of frames it lags quite a bit. Which is why I tend to just leave the signature on one frame and not go through moving it to a frame which is always visible.)

[Tranquil Sunshine]

I'll give you a break with the advice about backgrounds looking too tilted-upwards, since I've already said that a lot. (If you ever need me to clarify what I'm saying, please do say so.) The water also looks a bit strange to me, I'm not sure what exactly it is or how you would fix it. But I absolutely love the light and reflection effects in this one! You also did a nice job with the grass in the bottom of the picture and the little flowers in the top left corner.

LapisTheWolf responds:

tysm! I'm slowly fixing the weird upward backround XD.

[Terraria : Hallow Biome : Environmental Fanart]

This is really beautiful. I love the colors, you truly have captured the deceptive beauty of the Hallow! I love the little animations that make the scene come alive, too, and the inclusion of that Wyvern-shaped cloud from the game! Nice work!

RunicPixels responds:

<3 Thanks!

[WIP NES Game]

Okay, you just took Pixel Day to the next level. This is an absolutely wonderful flex, I love the ways in which it pays homage in a way to classic Mario and Sonic games while still having its own style and bringing new things to the table! I'm actually interested to see more of what will become of this. Consider yourself followed.

[PIXEL DAY RITUAL]

Man, I can't even draw pixel art all that well, and here you are flexing on all of us with not one, not two, but SIX different fire animations! And they all look so COOL and so SMOOTH! Good for you for being able to do awesome stuff like this! :D

[Pig goes oink!]

Haha, I actually was watching classic Doom videos today, and seeing this afterwards really made me smile. Really impressive pixel art, especially what you did with the lighting. Congrats on the feature!

[Mall day]

I love the colors of the background, quite aesthetically pleasing to me. Cyana is cute as always and daww lookit Grape :3

[Persona 5: Nintendo Game Boy edition]

All of these animations are so smooth and they really draw in the eye! I know close to nothing about Persona 5, but I can get a feel for what these characters are like based on how they look in these animations. Well done and congrats on the feature!

Ioruko responds:

Thanks so much! Glad to hear that!

[ankha sketch]

Really cute! Her hand holding the wine glass is backwards (like the glass should be in front of her hand, currently it looks like a left hand on her right wrist), but that's just a tiny nitpick. Looking forward to seeing the finished product!

[GLOWEEY]

I like the color scheme you used here! My advice about backgrounds looking a little too tilted upwards also applies here, but otherwise, it's pretty decent!

LapisTheWolf responds:

Thank you :P