Excellent gif, very dynamic! And you did a great adaptation of what was originally such a janky art style, hehe. If anyone were to reboot a show like that and make it great, it'd be you.
Honestly, I researched the adaptation and there's a lot of good and bad points. I do like the characters being more... visually distinct, shall we say, though pink lipstick doesn't look good at all on the American version of Sailor Jupiter, for various reasons. I also actually kinda prefer this orange and yellow scheme for Sailor Venus, though in the anime version, yellow details would definitely get lost up against that long blonde hair.