Thetageist's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Waha, Jojo, & Wukong (with Breadring)]

Cuties! I love Waha, and she’s extra adorable in your style!

KittyhawkMontrose responds:

Thank you! I love Waha too. She's so cute! And Jojo and Wukong are 💖

[MECHA SWORD!!!!]

Looks like a really beefed up Bomberman! Unless it’s from Bomberman and I’m just a dummy.

Great job with shading on the 3D shapes that make up the character.

Certly responds:

Not from bomberman, you're good!

[Have I made my Point?]

I think that enemy got... THE POINT! (reference)

Nice work with the pose especially!

PerKGrok responds:

Or if they have not yet, they may get it soon. 🙂

[Persona refv1]

Love the design a lot, and your style in general!

rotchan responds:

Thank you very much !

[⭐ Stardust Crusaders ⭐]

I like how you captured their personalities via face design. Especially the funny old man who says “oh my god”.

neonUFO responds:

thank you!! ;v; <3

[Albin Oslion]

A true lion of God(s?)! I like the design upgrades you gave to his hairstyle, clothing, and staff especially!

ZeTrystan responds:

Thank you! :D

[Zooble]

Hi Nebulate! Not bad for a fully lined style that you haven’t attempted in a bit. The one thing I’d recommend practicing is keeping curvy tubes you draw a uniform width, and drawing with longer strokes to make your sketchy line art look smoother. Otherwise it’s pretty good!

Nebulate responds:

Thanks. Yeah, i know im not the best with curved tubes. I am drawing with outlines for the month of Oktober so i definitly coud use some guide of how to have a better understanding. But still thanks for the tips.

[Pink Diamond Trying Out Dresses]

Good render.

If you’re looking for someone to scout you, there’s an NSFW Artist Hangout Thread in the Art Forum!

Edit: Asking someone to scout you is discouraged, but by showing up and talking, you'd likely eventually find someone who likes you enough to scout you.

SuperSlogger responds:

Oh really? Would I just leave a response asking for someone to scout me?

[Pomni the perfomer]

Really nice rendering - you seem to have improved a lot even since the last artwork you posted! Keep it up!

Theinkguy responds:

Appreciated man.

[Pixel Dolls | Forest Lords | Voidwalker]

I saw your post about not getting much feedback, and I agree that your work is very niche, but digital paper dolls are exactly my niche and I’m glad I came up check it out.

Well done overall, you rendered the details well with this style. My one point of confusion is why you posted screenshots of your own work - did the originals come out too small or similar? If so, I can help you figure out how to upscale your drawings in Piskel, that’s what I use for pixel art myself!

Maybe one way to get yourself some attention would be to team up with a programmer and make an entry for my Costume Jam, which is a game jam focused on dress-up games and virtual paper dolls like these. It ends on the 31st, so you’ll have time, there’s no judging stage, and I’ll be posting about all the entries that are made once the jam ends!

shadowfals responds:

Thank you for your feedback on this!

With too many things breaking around me, I don't think I can contribute to the Costume Jam. But that seems really fun! I'm looking forward to seeing what dress-up game creators share this month.

In answer to your question about the screenshots—I can't access the project files, currently. I was removing the posts from the Mastodon instance, so I put those up as placeholders until I can pull up the original images again.

Update on Oct 24, 2023: I've replaced the first screenshot. The rest is staying for my convenience... with the assumption it's not bothersome for others.

Update on May 4, 2023: No more screenshots!