Thetageist's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Guardian angel]

Wow! Congrats on getting a bunch of features since I last looked at your stuff, and also congrats on getting your Kickstarter funded! You're still continuing to nail the sketchy/painterly art style with the minimalist color scheme. Really nice work.

nashotobi responds:

thank you! yeah I've already almost released the whole book for free 93/100 stories

[da comfort times]

Are these all your OCs for Hazbin Hotel? (I think? I know very little about the series.) If so, they all go really well with the design style of the series as far as I've seen! If not, well, cool designs anyway. This artwork is really wholesome and I like it - it definitely conveys the feeling of having a friend group and the love and good times that come along with it.

Edit: Oh, sorry about that. I had no intention to offend you.

Angiedollhouse responds:

no, they're not, please do not compare my oc's to hazbin hotel, they're all made from a feeling of mine, they're very personal to me mwahahah
thank you anyways <3

[TASTY]

I like the conflict between the gory subject matter and pastel colors.

anewworldfool responds:

theyre hugos favorite colors, :]

[Lapis in Danganronpa]

Wow, you did a really good job with this one, especially from the standpoint of the things I normally critique you about! Nice job with the Danganronpa art style as well! I also like Lapis's outfit here, the hooded dress is cool.

LapisTheWolf responds:

Thank you!! (* ^ ω ^)

[GOES FERAL]

This is really cool! I love the bright colors and color scheme, the various effects, and the general magical/trippy look of it.

Angiedollhouse responds:

awaaa thank you!!! :D mwhaha thatz the kinda vibe i was going for :)

[I promise it'll be ok!]

You're definitely getting a lot better with these! Nice work! Skeletons still don't have noses, though... That apple also does seem to be a bit big for where it is in the background. But otherwise, really nice work!

LapisTheWolf responds:

ty ^^

[sketchhh]

The light in the corner makes the stuff in the corner a little bit harder to see, but that honestly doesn't interfere with all that much. There's also some stuff that gets cut off in the top, but that also isn't much.For a sketch, this is honestly pretty good! Nice work!

LapisTheWolf responds:

tysm^^

[Velyrrin]

Wow, really nice work! I especially like the blue lighting - it gives kind of a magical or moonlit feel to the piece.

imdrunkontea responds:

thank you :)

[Happy New Year]

Haha, does Flowey represent 2020 here? I love how he's just not sure what to do with himself since he's been left behind. I also like the floating lights and the fireworks in the colors of the human souls! The fireworks do look a bit close together, but I do like the little nod to the plot of Undertale! I don't know your AU, so is there a reason why they're sitting in a circle? But overall, I love the atmosphere of this piece and, once again, the colors you used really make it look magical. Nice work! Here's hoping for a great 2021!

LapisTheWolf responds:

Thank you . The circle like place they sit is a cave in my au where the echo flowers are where a crevice you can see the surface . Since Lapis used to be on the surface she found the spot where you can see the sky from the underground . This discovery led her to showing Sans the fireworks every year. Despite being underground they can both enjoy some surface related activities even though they can't quite get there. Flowey on the other hand hates people and the surface. He was invited anyway. But , chooses to linger in the shadows of the fire works.

[animatic thingy]

The initial parts looked a bit stiff - like, to me, it would've been better if the closing eyes, blushing, and extended arms happened at the same time, and it looks especially stiff when Lapis does it. I also would've liked it if you'd had a few frames of them actually hugging, as it jumps from them extending their arms to suddenly being holding each other. In the frames where they're together, Lapis also looks a bit smaller in comparison to Sans than you've drawn her in the past. But you've definitely improved in terms of how you draw her from an anatomy/proportions standpoint, and the frames where she moves in to kiss Sans especially look pretty good. Glad to see you continuing to try out animatics!

LapisTheWolf responds:

tysm!